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Asheey

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Nice video, a tip is to use some sort of music in the background and maybe talk a little louder cause it gets quite boring after a while, no offense, just a little something to think about.
 

Samsicle

First Step
Use expression my dear friend, no one likes someone who sits there monotone commentating random gameplay. I mean, at least your video quality is okay, make it more exciting for me to watch. I want your goal to be making videos that keep people engaged for at least 10 seconds, if it makes them keep going and get addicted to your videos.

Take this as constructive criticism and not to offense c:
 
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Judoh

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Nice video, a tip is to use some sort of music in the background and maybe talk a little louder cause it gets quite boring after a while, no offense, just a little something to think about.
THANKS FOR THE TIPS
 
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Judoh

Tree Puncher
Use expression my dear friend, no one likes someone who sits there monotone commentating random gameplay. I mean, at least your video quality is okay, make it more exciting for me to watch. I want your goal to be making videos that keep people engaged for at least 10 seconds, if it makes them keep going and get addicted to your videos.

Take this as constructive criticism and not to offense c:

THANK U I WILL DO MY BEST NEXT TIME :)
 
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